HUNTER: a Halloween short film

To use an apt cliche: still a better love story than Twilight. Seriously, though, great work! I love the script, and the acting was very well-done, particularly on the part of la vampira.

Last edited by Abbie (2013-11-01 00:21:41)

Slick.

I love this a lot, and there's so much potential to do more with it. Very well done, would like to see more.

Web series?

Wow, really cool!  And actually one of the lines gave me an idea:  you have the bit where the hunter grabs a cross, and of course it doesn't work, presumably because he lacks the required faith, and the vampire taunts him by saying "you might as well have grabbed a picture of Santa Claus".   

You could do that, and then take it one step further by having a character then grab something funny and unexpected, but which sincerely does represent some ideal of goodness and light and purity for that character (for me, it would be something like a picture of Kermit The Frog), and then have that actually succeed in repelling the vampire.  (If you wanted to be more serious about it, you could have them grab a picture of their baby or something.) 

Maybe somebody somewhere's done that already.  I'm not super knowledgeable about the vampire genre.  Anyway, really interesting, and I look forward to any more you might do!

I don't subscribe to any web series but I'd watch the hell out of this if it became one.

Team Alba.

Edit: Watched again. Whoever did the set dressing, please let them know that I noticed the half dozen long coats in the front hall, all black. I laughed. I take it you borrowed all the coats.

Last edited by Phi (2013-11-11 16:07:27)

I liked the potential, but felt the ending came a little short. Great delivery from the actors, if a little off ADR. Great cinematography