Topic: The Hyacinth Disaster
Hey, pals. So I've done the best I can without more sets of eyes on the script. If anyone feels like critiquing the hell out of something, here's the link to the first two 'episodes':
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Be as general or as specific as you wish.
For anyone who still wants to do a voice, give this a read and let me know who you'd like to play. Every role is on the table. I did what I could to make sure the characters sound different, but, like I said, feedback would be best.
PS I'm very open to suggestions for a better title.