I think the twist works just fine. The thing that might work better is establishing why this Camaro-American man needs to be in a hurry. He seemed quite leisurely in the first half.

By the way, what sort of microphones do potential participants have? I have a high-quality Samson USB mike. The Snowball USB mikes are also very good. Headset mikes vary broadly.

Sound quality on these depends to a great extent on everyone having a decent mike and knowing how to avoid puffing and whatnot.

Why should we care about theatrical ticket sales as opposed to overall revenue? That's like worrying that sex is in a slump even tho births are up just because fewer people are doing it missionary style.

/was planning on making that analogy about cars
//not sure what happened

You were right on the money, Seth.

/Teague, give him a dollar