Having now completed the arduous process of filming my stuff, I believe I am now more than qualified to provide valuable notes on my contribution, despite not having seen the whole script.
I believe my 'speaking in tongues' scene should have sub-titles: first, Japanese, then Greek, then Klingon, then Dingbats. The last sub-title should be "Oh, ho! Let's go!"
I believe the scene where I solve the Rubik's cube in under seven minutes (apart from that one corner, which doesn't count anyway) should be left uncut, so as to raise the project from merely artistic to almost wikipedian.
The inexplicably unasked-for shot where I'm riding on the roof of a blazing car as it careens down a hill should clearly be the last of the movie. Although I disagree, I would understand your decision to cut before we hit the ice cream van.
I think the credits should be done in the style of 'Dallas', only with more Hagman.
I hope this helps.
Oh, and for everyone else who hasn't read the script either: spoilers!