LoL, great find Dorkman, bout sums it up.

I'm of the opinion that the drama of a story is evident in what is happening, so the overuse of capitalisation to force emotional responses from the reader is off-putting and slightly condescending. Scripts shouldn't need laugh tracks.

So that's my initial reaction, but I'm also surprised at how crude the prose is. It's not as bad, though, as Rodriguez's unproduced early draft of Predators (the one with Dutch), which was written as if an 8-year-old on a sugar rush was dictating it.

But fun fact, I've already spotted a few lines of dialogue even in this draft that would have immediately improved the flow and logic of the film had they been shot (or left in the cut of the film) - someone actually registering what Shaw has gone through in the medical bay for instance.