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Topic: So I've been writing a little something

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  • From: Red Deer, AB
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Re: So I've been writing a little something

Nicely done sir! Much much much more enjoyable.

Although if i want to get picky, the only thing that really stands out is the little schitck with the battledroids, (I wasn't programed to think) seems a little out of place/on the nose. I mean unless you're planning on doing something with it in the larger picture, it feels really weird.

Otherwise, really nice.

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Re: So I've been writing a little something

Agree with Maul entirely.

Fucking awesome, the battle droid bit caught my attention. Nicely done.

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  • From: Florida
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Re: So I've been writing a little something

Agreed with Maul and Teague.

Good read, interested to see where you would go with it.

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  • From: Indiana, USA
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Re: So I've been writing a little something

That's was cool. The droid corporal should have had his legs crushed and just disassembled the broken private to take his legs.

Also, those goddamned alluvial dampers. When is Galactic Motors going to provide a reliable replacement?

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