HOLY SHIT

Editorially, I think it just needs a bit of fat trimming and score, to be honest. There's some heads and tails that could be lopped off to tighten down individual shots, it could "feel" faster just with some more judicious slicing on the takes. Plus with some score, and more driving shots to separate the vignettes, I think it'd feel more like a short film and less like a string of lines. A brief musical interlude every now and then with pretty out-the-window driving shots from everybody.

My offer to help with the audio stands, I'd love to help there... but also, I could score this thing. I'm thinking something cute and synthy, sort of an ongoing incidental score, with touches of moving here and beautiful there.

What all other driving shots do you want?

I can see use for more and/or better generic exterior driving shots, as well as a McDonalds arrival (and maybe a Mcdonalds departure, but I think the gag there works better as a hard cut to a generic driving shot, not actually leaving the restaurant).

HOORAY FOR THAT JOKE

I'll try to film my shit for ya either today or on the weekend.

I also hesitantly volunteer to help with the audio mix, if that wasn't something you were looking forward to. It'll just be a lot of creative noise removal and leveling, for the most part.

Good observation there, it hadn't occurred to me the significance of the one-two punch: Walt ultimately does the right thing and turns himself in, only to say "nope, fuck that," and goes off on what is sure to be a rampage.

oh god, I need to listen back to this

EDIT: Man, that's like the sonic equivalent of a guy stumbling down the sidewalk.

Yeah, it seems like the only way to end this thing in time is no more twists. As it is, it ever will be, and we just see what happened last.

Zap, I edit the show. I edit the show. And it's a run on me.

If anyone was ever gonna make the call not to put it in, it would be the guy who edits the show, about whom the joke is made.

It's out of your hands. You are absolved. 

AH!

The rest of your list is currently cookin.'

If that's everything, then, hey, guess what. This "some episodes aren't online yet" madness is officially fucking over!

...done...

Like finishing the pizza when you've had all but one slice.