Howbout a version where Capa chooses not to visit Icarus 1, and Searle goes nuts?
Searle takes very careful tabs on everyone, and having picked up on the captain's sunburn and peeling skin in the captain's logs, spends way too much time on the observation deck as research. Much of the first and a half acts remain unchanged.
As Icarus II comes up behind Mercury, they briefly link up with Icarus I's almost completely destroyed computer, and pull down fragments of their records and the rest of the lost Pinbacker logs, which come through in staggered fragments. Pinbacker, still floating on the other ship, makes some convincing communications with the Icarus II crew, and they conflict over whether or not to go pick him up. They decide against it while compiling his logs, which deteriorate into crazy space gospel describing humans and the planet Earth as a rude accident that should be exterminated if the universe wants them to.
Searle, the only member of the crew that's been exposing himself to the sun for as long as Pinbacker had, manages to set up a secure line of conversation with the old captain for some more psychological insight, speaking with Pinbacker accelerates the sun god complex, catalyzing Searle to use his advanced psychological comprehension of the entire crew and brute murdery force to try and unravel the mission.
You end up with this lovely double Icarus metaphor where a member of II flys too close to the insane guy left from the original Icarus, which again ends up being their (almost) downfall.
Note on smeary baddie: In the commentary they mention that the smeary effect was supposed to be practical, shot through a diopter and manipulated by an AC on set. There are some offlines in the deleted scenes, where it looks like it wasn't satisfactorily successful in the footage, so from there was sent to the smeary liquified place it stands now.
Last edited by paulou (2010-06-01 19:31:04)