I think you need to do some work with the camera, you haven't included any colour at all!    

Really nicely made short, gets in makes its point then ends.

Good Job!

That was perfect. At first you're thinking "oh, great, another one of these." Then you're thinking "the music choice is a little weird." And then you start grinning.

Photography was good, smart call going black and white to avoid tricky color correction. I have no critiques off the top of my head, that was just a nifty little short.

Great job, glad you've become post-y-er.

Fantastic little film you got there. 

"Life is about movies; anything else is a bonus!"- Me   

Great, twisted little vignette. Nice shot selection and the camera work added a lot to the story. Liked the reveal of the body.

When using available light, knowing how and where to take light away becomes really valuable. For instance, on some of the white walls, if you flag off some light from the window, you can get a soft shaded gradient on that wall to make it a little more dynamic and help shape the space. Similarly, every wall in that room is bouncing light around and adding fill. You can further shape light then by hanging some thick black fabric or a curtain or something to cut down on bounce behind the camera. Then, if you want to add more, you can use a piece of poster board or something to bounce the light exactly where you want it. Really cheap way to get light under control and use it to your advantage.

That makes me want to know more about how that all came about. Did the guy actually kill her, or was it a "World's Best Dad" thing, where she OD's and he decided to make it look like suicide instead.

Unfortunately, the cops are totally gonna know she didn't write that letter if they find anything else she'd written.

I like this a lot.