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Clearly, Rowling did a lot of planning and built a fantastical world that served her very well the further she went. It just bothers me when people claim that she's a genius at planning the whole arc of the saga when she frequently first introduces things only when she needs to them to become central to the plot. That's clear evidence that she didn't plan ahead much, especially before book 5.

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Maybe she didn't mention every single aspect of her massive world upfront because that's both terrible writing and it would rob the series of any reveals down the road?

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I think the problem with that argument, though, is that, because we haven't seen many of her outlines, you could still make the claim of it being an ass-pull that she made look good, no matter how detailed her planning was, unless she were being incredibly obvious with her foreshadowing. The whole point of good foreshadowing is that it isn't obvious the first time around; if it were, it would be clunky.

I can't speak for Zarban or others, but I think one of the main problems for me is just there's almost nothing that I'd call foreshadowing.  It's just a ton of references to things, some of which get picked up later but the vast majority of which don't, and then it just becomes the Texas Sharpshooter fallacy, like the people who claim to find hidden anagrams or something in the works of Shakespeare or The Bible, but then just forget to mention the 99.9% of cases where the hidden anagram is "ASQJHDIZUDHHUASD".

As I said before, I'd be interested to hear arguments about specific references and plot threads, and why the "Rowling had it all planned out from Day 1" theory is more plausible than various alternatives.

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[The Order of the Phoenix and the prophecy about Harry aren't even hinted at until Order, despite the fact that all the central characters in Azkaban were in the order and V's whole motivation for attacking Harry is the prophecy.

Untrue regarding the prophecy. When Harry tells Dumbledore about Trelawney's prediction re: Pettigrew, Dumbledore says that makes it the second true prophecy she's ever made. I would give her the benefit of the doubt that she at least figured out in advance the reason Voldemort went after Harry.

I do agree about the lack of setup for the Deathly Hallows though. That bothered me a lot when I read the final book.

EDIT: worth noting, it's also clear she DIDN'T have things all planned out by her own admission. She changed her mind about killing off characters which would have necessarily had major repercussions, and in the case of Goblet she's talked about getting halfway through before realizing she'd created a massive plot hole she had to do all sorts of calisthenics around. But the throughline of the Voldemort storyline -- and the backstory -- I expect she nailed down and could drop clues about whenever.

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I want to put this Dorkman and the Dorkman from the religion thread in a pit and make them fight.

Anyway, I personally think there was planning and some retconning in the writing of the Potter series.  Doesn't make the outcome any less impressive if some of it was just serendipity ("Boy, I'm so glad I mentioned X in that first book!")

When I wrote the series bible for the continuation of Ark, an entire plot thread evolved from my wanting to justify something the costume department did that I didn't like.   Now if we ever DO more Ark, that plotline will make me LOOK like a damn genius who had it all figured out from the beginning.   I'm okay with that, and I'm sure Jo is too.

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Trey wrote:

I want to put this Dorkman and the Dorkman from the religion thread in a pit and make them fight.

I think you'll find he's declared himself impressed by HP as well. wink

What I'd love is if we someday got a book or set of books collating the early drafts and development notes, a la History of Lord of the Rings. (Naturally it would be called Hogwarts, a History.) But seeing as how she was super poor at the time and didn't know if it would go anywhere, she probably tossed a lot of that as she went or burned it for warmth or something. sad

I'm sure she had a series bible of her own, but I agree that a lot of details certainly got filled in as she went. What she knew when is a question only she can answer, but it's fun to guess.

EDIT: For example, I would bet that she had sorted out the broad strokes of horcruxes before she began writing the first book, though whether or not she'd given them that name isn't possible to know nor really relevant. An author as fixated on motivation, as Zarban pointed out, would have to know for her own peace of mind how Voldemort survived the rebounding curse.

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So much is made of the connection between them and Harry's scar that if she had sorted out horcruxes she had certainly already decided Harry was one of them.
She probably had not yet decided as of the first book what any of the others would be, though I would say she wrote Chamber knowing the nature of the diary. By the same token, I would bet she had not decided on the difficulty level of destroying horcruxes nor that basilisk venom was one of the only ways to do it -- at the time stabbing the diary just in general was probably enough -- and so that bit and the whole "goblin steel takes in that which makes it stronger" chicanery is pure retcon to create more of a challenge for the trio in the final volume.

But of course this could all be nonsense. Only Jo Rowling knows for sure. smile

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Dorkman wrote:

What I'd love is if we someday got a book or set of books collating the early drafts and development notes, a la History of Lord of the Rings. (Naturally it would be called Hogwarts, a History.) But seeing as how she was super poor at the time and didn't know if it would go anywhere, she probably tossed a lot of that as she went or burned it for warmth or something. sad

The entire idea of saved drafts is probably done with. Yes, some software keeps an archive for you, but as you keep editing the same screen of text instead of typing a new page, the old is more often just deleted.

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Well, she wrote the first novel at least on a typewriter, but yeah.

I'm personally trying to get in the habit when I write of saving drafts as I go, partially just in case I accidentally stumble into something awesome and want to be able to show the path that led me there but more so that I can always go back to what I wrote before or cannibalize earlier drafts for descriptions or dialogue I like. If we're lucky, she did the same.

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Maybe she didn't mention every single aspect of her massive world upfront because that's both terrible writing and it would rob the series of any reveals down the road?

Having Harry clean an old Triwizard Tournament trophy in detention in Chamber of Secrets wouldn't ruin Goblet of Fire.

And imagine writing a movie adaptation of Prisoner of Azkaban now without using the term "Death Eater". Both impossible and pointless. It would be like never mentioning "Jedi knight" until Return of the Jedi.

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I would bet that she had sorted out the broad strokes of horcruxes before she began writing the first book. ... I would say she wrote Chamber knowing the nature of the diary.

We've seen plenty of cases where screenwriters say they had no idea there might be a sequel or they would have provided for it better. I think that was the case here. I think Rowling came up with Chamber of Secrets by thinking "Now that V is dead and gone, who will be the villain? I know! He left behind a piece of himself when he was younger!" And the idea of horcruxes came later as a way to tie books 1 and 2 to the others and make V hard to kill in the end. My evidence is the fact that destroying V in Stone didn't make him a powerless wraith again in Chamber. The real, actual, present-day V is totally absent and there is only young Tom Riddle.

Let me be clear, tho, and say that I think Rowling planned each individual book incredibly well. It has to be really hard to write story after story that takes place over an entire school year and yet maintains both mystery and good pacing. And she was clearly very good at keeping careful notes about who did what when so the timelines matched and she could reuse characters. It's an astonishing feat.

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I want an "I'm with Zarban" t-shirt.

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I want an "I'm with Zarban" t-shirt.

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Having DM'd several multi-year long RPG campaigns, the number of harmless background details and ass pulled events when something interesting needed to happen that later were retconned into having greater meaning is roughly equal to the number of things that had long term meaning from the second they appeared. What I've learned is, as long as it's done well, it doesn't matter. Your players/readers will enjoy it either way and, frankly, they never have to know which are which.

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It certainly can happen. One of the reasons I was so taken with Breaking Bad was the fact that they were quite openly making it up as they went and yet managed to frequently make things feel like they were coming full circle.

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It certainly can happen. One of the reasons I was so taken with Breaking Bad was the fact that they were quite openly making it up as they went and yet managed to frequently make things feel like they were coming full circle.

Yup. Vince Gilligan is very open about that fact. He's said in the past that the only thing the writers ever planned ahead for was the end of season 2, because they had those flash forwards. He said that they enjoyed finding details from past episodes and working them into new ones.

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They did have a plan for the life of the entire show initially, but that involved killing Jesse at the end of the 1st season and that whole thing went out the window.

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Curious, and someone had to ask it: how do you guys rank the books/films? My rankings are:

Books                                        Films
7. Chamber of Secrets           8. Order of the Phoenix
6. Philosopher's Stone           7. Goblet of Fire
5. Half-Blood Prince              6. Deathly Hallows Part 2
4. Prisoner of Azkaban           5. Half-Blood Prince
3. Goblet of Fire                   4. Philosopher's Stone
2. Order of the Phoenix          3. Deathly Hallows Part 1
1. Deathly Hallows                2. Chamber of Secrets
                                         1. Prisoner of Azkaban

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Azkaban is #1 for both of my lists.

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Me too, I really loved that book.

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Books                                      Films             
1.) Prisoner of Azkaban          1.) Prisoner of Azkaban
2.) Deathly Hallows                2.) Order of the Phoenix
3.) Philosopher's Stone          3.) Deathly Hallows Part 1
4.) Half-Blood Prince               4.) Philosopher's Stone
5.) Chamber of Secrets           5.) Chamber of Secrets
6.) Order of the Phoenix         6.) Half Blood Prince
7.) Goblet of Fire                     7.) Deathly Hallows Part 2
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                                            8.) Goblet of Fire

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Books                                   Films             
1.) Order of the Phoenix      1.) Prisoner of Azkaban
2.) Chamber of Secrets        2.) Chamber of Secrets
3.) Prisoner of Azkaban         3.) Deathly Hallows Part 2
4.) Deathly Hallows               4.) Order of the Phoenix
5.) Sorceror's Stone               5.) Sorceror's Stone
6.) Half Blood Prince                6.) Half Blood Prince
7.) Goblet of Fire                      7.) Deathly Hallows Part 1
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                                                 8.) Goblet of Fire

I should note that my book list is tentative, since I've never gone back and re-read any of them, meaning it's been over a decade since I read the first one. As for the movies, I generally like most of them, with Goblet of Fire being the obvious terrible one. Deathly Hallows Part 1 is one of the best in the series for about an hour, and then turns into a shitty twilight movie for the last hour. I admit to being biased because I hate the trend of splitting stories in half and releasing them as seperate movies, meaning you get no climax and feel shitty walking out.

Prisoner of Azkaban and Chamber of Secrets are both great though. Like, for as progressively adult as the stories get, I'm always impressed by how dark Chamber of Secrets is for being only the 2nd one in the series. They're fighting giant killer spiders and snakes, and you've got your 12 year old kid protagonist bleeding to death at the end of it.

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Books                                                        Films
1) Prisoner of Azkaban                               1) Deathly Hallows Part 1
2) Deathly Hallows                                     2) Prisoner of Azkaban
3) Chamber of Secrets                                3) Half-Blood Prince
4) Order of the Phoenix                               4) Goblet of Fire
5) Goblet of Fire                                         5) Deathly Hallows Part 2
6) Half-Blood Prince                                    6) Order of the Phoenix
7) Sorcerer's Stone                                     7) Chamber of Secrets
                                                                 8) Sorcerer's Stone

I think I'm in the minority on most of this. Azkaban isn't my favorite movie. I think it's great, but Hallows Part 1 just nailed the character stuff while maintaining a distinct, visually interesting style. Also, RIP Dobby. :'(

I also don't hate movies four and five. I think they're really fun adventures, especially Goblet of Fire. They've aged a lot better than the first two, and I think that when people look back on the series, they'll be thinking of stuff from those middle movies.

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Books                                                        Films
1) Deathly Hallows                                  1) Prisoner of Azkaban
2) Prisoner of Azkaban                            2) Deathly Hallows Part 1
3) Half-Blood Prince                                 3) Half-Blood Prince
4) Order of the Phoenix                           4) Order of the Phoenix
5) Goblet of Fire                                       5) Chamber of Secrets
6) Chamber of Secrets                             6) Goblet of Fire
7) Philosopher's Stone                             7) Philosopher's Stone
                                                                 8) Deathly Hallows Part 2

Azkaban was my #1 book until Deathly Hallows. The final book brings everything in for a landing and absolutely sticks it. The final film by contrast makes a complete hash of it. The buildup to the battle is great, but the battle itself and the complete failure to resolve the mystery plot or have the final confrontation be anything more than the magical equivalent of a knife fight... I mean, it was all there, right on the page. How you fuck that up when someone already figured it out for you is beyond me.

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I can only rate the films.

1. Prisoner of Azkaban
2. Deathly Hallows Part 1
3. Order of the Phoenix
4. Chamber of Secrets
5. Deathly Hallows Part 2
6. Philosopher's Stone
7. Half-Blood Prince
8. Goblet of Fire

The first two are really the only ones I'd re-watch again, though.

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I'm with Jimmy.

1. Prisoner of Azkaban
2. Philosopher's Stone
3. Chamber of Secrets
4. Deathly Hallows Part 1
5. Order of the Phoenix
6. Half-Blood Prince
7. Goblet of Fire
8. Deathly Hallows Part 2

Actually I did read Azkaban on a whim one Summer in high school. Liked it a lot.

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Books:

1) Order Of The Phoenix
2) Deathly Hallows
3) Goblet of Fire
4) Prisoner Of Azkaban
5) Half Blood Prince
6) Chamber Of Secrets
7) Philosophers Stone

I know most people probably bawk when I put Chambers and Stone at the bottom, but for the most it's really just due to my preference for the darker, more twisted elements that started to really come in after Azkaban. That, and I also much prefer the longer reads, there's more happening, it's more complex the stories are more epic in scale. So I still love them dearly but they are definitely the 2 that are most aimed at a younger audience, and feel like it. (Which is the point yes, but this a preference list, get over it)

Movies:

1)Deathly Hallows Pt1
2) Philosophers Stone
3) Chamber Of Secrets
4)
5)
6)
7)
8) The rest

Deathly Hallows Pt 1 because I can distinctly remember sitting in front of it go, "wow, they actually finally managed to figure out how to make one of these damn movies" and then the movie ended, and I didn't hate it. And then DH2 came out, and all of that was undone.

Stone and Chambers, because I can still remember when I was too young to have ithem overshadowed by everything that came after it, and I could still enjoy them.

And the rest because it's been too long since I've actually sat down and watched them all in some sort of order to remember what each one was like individually. So they're pretty much all just a big ball of angry in my head.

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