Nicely done! I love the dry delivery style; really helps deliver the friend-to-friend tone. This almost feels like a commercial for something (toe cream?) which you should totally collect on if you get a chance. Good stuff.
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Nicely done! I love the dry delivery style; really helps deliver the friend-to-friend tone. This almost feels like a commercial for something (toe cream?) which you should totally collect on if you get a chance. Good stuff.
Mind if I play through?
1. Citizen Kane
2. Close Encounters of the Third Kind
3. The Dark Knight
4. Who Framed Roger Rabbit?
5. Super 8
6. Lethal Weapon
The premise-writing formula I've heard is "What does the hero want, what's standing in his way, and what terrible thing will happen if he doesn't succeed?
...
What they want, and why we should want it too, doesn't ever connect.
I have truly missed these types of reviews. Story > else. I'll pass for now - appreciate the notes!
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