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A Servant of Wisdom
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- drewjmore
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Re: A Servant of Wisdom
Dude. That rocks. I anticipated/dreaded the ending all along, but your resolution of it is exquisite. Quite a few minor typos and a few spellcheck errors, I think. Arguably too sexually graphic, but I realize that's kind of your thing and it offends me not at all. It does however make recommending it to other people a bit skeevy.
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- Invid
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Re: A Servant of Wisdom
I'll have to talk to my editor about the typos, although the one at the very end I know of and will be corrected the next time I update the site. As for the sex, yeah, the stories aren't for everyone. Those scenes keep me from even considering putting the stuff in online stores, but I usually only include them when they're needed. Given the site hosting my stories is a sex site, they're quite restrained 
The Waifs has only one or two erotic scenes, so should pass everyone's prude test.
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