• From: Buffalo, NY
  • Registered: 2010-01-08
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Topic: A Servant of Wisdom

I just finished a short book, more a novella than a novel.

http://www.asstr.org/~Invid_Fan/a-servant-of-wisdom/

"God appeared to Abram, and said unto him, I am El Shaddai."

A Tree. A Mighty Oak. A Goddess of old. Tom heard her. Heard a God of his ancestors make a covenant with him, him and his descendants. All it would require... was a sacrifice. (Author's Note: followers of the God of Abraham may find this tale annoying)

http://www.asstr.org/~Invid_Fan/_Media/a-servant-of-wisdom-cover_med-2.jpeg

I write stories! With words!
http://www.asstr.org/~Invid_Fan/

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  • From: Chicago-ish
  • Registered: 2009-11-23
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Re: A Servant of Wisdom

Dude. That rocks. I anticipated/dreaded the ending all along, but your resolution of it is exquisite. Quite a few minor typos and a few spellcheck errors, I think. Arguably too sexually graphic, but I realize that's kind of your thing and it offends me not at all. It does however make recommending it to other people a bit skeevy.

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  • From: Buffalo, NY
  • Registered: 2010-01-08
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Re: A Servant of Wisdom

I'll have to talk to my editor about the typos, although the one at the very end I know of and will be corrected the next time I update the site. As for the sex, yeah, the stories aren't for everyone. Those scenes keep me from even considering putting the stuff in online stores, but I usually only include them when they're needed. Given the site hosting my stories is a sex site, they're quite restrained smile

The Waifs has only one or two erotic scenes, so should pass everyone's prude test.

I write stories! With words!
http://www.asstr.org/~Invid_Fan/

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