Topic: Stories: Experience vs Spine vs Whatever the hell it is I'm doing

That's the best title I could come up with, sue me.

I've been trying to write some short films lately, nothing specific just write. And I find I keep coming back to the same central concept for them.

DiF has infamously pegged a Kubrickian style film as one that will just throw you in the middle of the action and allow you to just experience it for yourself. But DiF also talks a lot about having a spine for your movie, (That central theme or moral that your movie surrounds itself around). And when I'm writing I keep coming back to this whole idea of just throwing the audience into the scene and watching as the character goes through whatever events happen and watching them change and grow. But there isn't any real spine to the story, it's just watching this human being change by what's happening. (In one case the character starts off literally as a blank slate and as it progresses the character evolves out of the events she has to live through.

Is there any real merit to that style of storytelling or am I just bad at this?

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I don't think that every story needs to follow conventions. Go for it, it might turn out interesting.

"The Doctor is Submarining through our brains." --Teague

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3 (edited by BigDamnArtist 2012-02-21 20:04:00)

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I am, but I wanted to throw the idea up for debate. See what this rather large collective of filmmakers has to say on the subject.

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I've found the question "Why did someone tell me that story?" to be a useful metric.

And I'd suggest using literally correctly, unless the story is literally about a chalkboard.

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5 (edited by BigDamnArtist 2012-02-21 20:11:35)

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Yeah, well that's my point. That's the question you ask a Spine style movie, and the only answer I can give to that is "To watch this character grow and change." And I'm not sure if that's really worth anything.

And did you know what I meant, yeah, so fuck you.

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6 (edited by Zarban 2012-02-21 22:17:23)

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I see what you did there, Mr. Double Shot.

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Just write it. Get a first draft down to solidify the story.

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But then I won't get the pot of gold from the super famous movie guy, cause obviously being an asshole is the only way to actually achieve anything.

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enough with the adverbs

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to fill out and be less of a jerk, the life of the guy that wanders in isn't obvious or actual. you can meet people like this in real life in LA. From any perspective, the point of the narrative is to chill the fuck out and be a little more kind to everyone, no matter who you are.

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15 (edited by BigDamnArtist 2012-02-22 09:04:58)

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1) I just wanted to say that I love the word "moxie".
2) that link is good, and there should be a much larger collection of that sort of thing.

I hope to god my friend never decides to upload to youtube the videos we made when we were in highschool. I would probably hyperventilate myself into an aneurism if that were to happen...

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Trey Stokes. A man for the people, and a man for the person.

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I dunno, it made sense a second ago.

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