Great review Alicia!
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Great review Alicia!
We're coming up on this threads twelve anniversary!
The good news: everything is fine.
Thank you Holden!
Followup: once you're finished outlining, did you proceed to write through the outline in a linear or non-linear fashion for those ten-minute sprints?
Sorry Beeg, I somehow missed this.
I write linearly. I know some writers like to jump around but I worry I'd confuse things, or write all my favourite scenes first and not want to bother with dull ones.
Btw the current draft of Book One is nearly complete and we are looking to send it out to beta readers in the next week. If anyone fancies reading it over the next three weeks and giving feedback it would be very much appreciated!
Lucy gets picked on by the other transforming robots for not being a race car or fighter jet but a lowly sofa bed.
This is a piece of Flash fiction I wrote which has nothing to do with any fighting robot franchise you may be familiar with. I've never actually seen one, although I half remember seeing a cartoon during the actual eighties.
So, at the end of last year my friend Malcolm approached me about working on an ongoing series together.
We set the goal of writing three books in twenty twenty-one.
This was something I would not have considered achievable even a month prior.
Whilst I had written some novels the amount of story required for an ongoing series was simply unimaginable at that point until I actually sat down and did just that.
We kicked around ideas for genre and decided on space opera. Mainly because it's the thing I read more than anything. It’s where I live.
Rather than plan a story we began by planning a universe. similarly to how you would develop a Bible for a TV series when you wrote the pilot script.
The idea was to come up with characters, locations and situations that would allow us to continue generating story rather than simply coming up with a story and trying to hook a sequel after it.
The initial character ideas we had for the most part remained in place throughout the writing process.
We made a point not to give anyone final names and most, have changed at least once as we have gone on.
The thing that went through the most changes was the setting for the stories. We didn't initially want to simply set it on a single ship.
One idea was there would be a mining planet that would act as the outpost for humanity in this sector.
But we ended up setting it on a luxury liner known as SS Olympic, a ship that has most definitely seen how better days much like humanities Empire itself. It is currently in decline.
Like series such as Deep Space Nine or Babylon 5 we wanted to flesh out a single corner of the sector where our characters would reside that the audience could come to get familiar with like Hogwarts, or The Belt in The Expanse rather than try and set up an entire universe.
It had to be somewhere where humanity had an outpost and where other races came and intermingled which is how I coined the project title "Gibraltar". The British conclave where Europe and Africa meet.
The first thing I wrote for the project was a would-be reader magnet. In hindsight this was a great exercise in fleshing out the universe, but less successful in writing a reader magnet.
It focused on a character who would have featured in a side plot in the first novel which is usually a good way to go with reader magnets. Unfortunately as we continued to develop the novel that subplot ended up being dropped.
On the twenty second of february I began working on the first book. the draft was completed in seven weeks and it, like all good first entries. Sticks closest to the traditional heroes journey than any of the later instalments.
Every week we were having writers conferences to keep developing the story and give feedback on scenes as they were written.
Initially this was whilst I was walking home from work in the cold, and the dark, and the rain until we figured out a time that could accommodate both our schedules.
I decided to stop drafting after book one and spend the rest of April and May outlining the second and third books back to back.
I realised I would lose momentum if I were continually stopping and starting and it made more sense to just take the time to figure out a roadmap that I could follow for the rest of the year.
I have a love, hate relationship with outlining. Once it's done it's the best experience imaginable but when you're doing it, it is like pulling teeth except I've had teeth pulled and it usually over in about an hour, not so with outlining!
I made a point to break down exactly how many chapters and scenes these novels would require. I have a spreadsheet for this because you can't have fun without a spreadsheet.
I looked at various books in the genre and made a note of the usual word count, how many chapters they had.
Now I know that many people flinch at the idea of this kind of structured writing seeing it as a paint-by-numbers formula rather than a guideline but these are not hard and fast rules.
if I feel a chapter needs to be longer or shorter I will tweak it later but at the outlining stage it gives me a structure to work with, rather than the blank page to stare at.
Knowing that the books would be around twenty-one chapters with about four POV characters allowed me to break everything down in a way that I could outline it relatively quickly.
I then started book two at the end of May and finished it in mid-july.
I took a couple of weeks off to rest before cracking on with book three.
Book three took the longest to write, mainly due to other things happening in my life but slowed things down. I endeavour to write every day when I’m on a project but I don't make it a rule.
There's plenty of stress in one's life already without beating yourself up for not getting writing done.
However where possible I did try and write, even if it was only ten minutes a day. I figured that even when I was at my most exhausted I could go for ten minutes, and when I couldn't I didn't.
Towards the end of October I was starting to get a bit frustrated with how long it was taking and decided to double down on getting it finished. So in the spirit of nanowrimo I aimed for two thousand word today and after a week and a half I had the finished manuscript.
Ironically if book four what outlined I would have probably been quite content to keep going at that rate for a bit longer.
Writing is like a muscle and if you keep using it, you get better at using it. The worst thing you can do is to take too long off between projects.
I'm always at my slowest when starting fresh.
So, we did it we have three manuscripts written and there is even a prologue that has been released to the public, subscribe to the newsletter if you want to check it out. Link below.
So next we will continue editing Book one. Malcolm has taken his pass at that and now I'm taking a second look and then I will write a reader magnet, properly this time.
I'm not entirely sure what new information that post gave us, but I really enjoyed reading it. What's that about?
Sorry you've had a time of it, but it's really good to have you back.
Anyway, after a quick exercise using only stock images I could find on the server at work
This is not the limitation you are implying it is
Looking great. I love a good matte painting, I used to have a brilliant 9 hour tutorial by Dylan Cole that talked about starting with a sketch, adding photo elements, and digitally painting to merge it all. Wish I still had it.
And of course over on Twitter I've got Owen complaining about my pronunciation of car brands
Fixed it for you.
I’ve been rereading the X-wing novels for the first time in almost twenty years. They’re really enjoyable. Corran Horn is one best characters in the saga.
So, with one thing and another I didn’t get to make a short film like I’d had hoped this year. So instead, recently I’ve been playing refamiliarizing myself with Photoshop.
One of the things I’ve been playing around with is colourising old black and white photos. This is Douglas, he was my Mother’s father. He was a photographer with a studio in the West End of London in the 1930’s.
I knew my mum had a large print of his, so I got my sister to sneak it out and get me a scan. So I set about making a colour version to give my mum for Christmas.
I used a gradient map with photos of myself as reference for the skin tones, the hardest bits to get right were the lips, which had a separate gradient map and the skin blending in with the hair line which took a bit of experimenting to get just right.
I'm sorry Mando, The Jedi is in another castle"
I'm going to hazard a guess and say another shed.
Sheds making shed. How perverse!
I'm sure I'll end up watching the movie, but damn Dune was a dull book.
Yeah, This is coming from Cardiff Uni so clearly Torchwood is up to something.
at Cardiff University in England.
Oh no they didn't!
Star Trek: Picard The Last Best Hope – Una McCormack
what can I say? I am a sucker for tie-in novels. Opinions seem divided on the latest Star Trek series there were things I really liked about it and others I was less keen on. This book may be the best thing about it, and I don’t mean that in a derogatory way. It expands the back story glimpsed in the show between the ending of the next-generation movies and the start of the pilot. Following Picard as he led the mission to evacuate the Romulan Empire. The amount of space politics leaves it feeling more like “Babylon 5” than traditional Star Trek even borrowing the other series moniker for the title. This is no bad thing and it really expands both the Star Trek universe and the new Picard series both in the way a good tie-in novel should but also perhaps some think we should have seen in the episodes proper.
The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet – Becky Chambers
This is one of those books that gets mentioned a lot recently and I was put off picking it up by the comparisons to firefly. I love firefly, but every third advert on my Facebook timeline is an e-book comparing itself to firefly and I don’t want any more second-rate knockoffs. I enjoyed the characters and world here although the book is rather episodic and never really feels like it’s telling a larger story, it was nice to read a more uplifting positive sci-fi tale without everything being horrifically “twee”.
Second foundation – Isaac Asimov
I actually took an extra couple of days before starting this book whilst I looked for the third entry mistakenly assuming this had been the second. I really enjoyed the first book and everything it set up, so was really disappointed when none of it really seemed to be paid off. I can’t really fault Asimov for the concept he used that have become cliché in the many decades since but this didn’t particularly grab me. I would have liked to have seen the establishment of the second Empire that the books had been alluding to the whole time, perhaps this is something that happens in one of the many, many sequels he continued to write but I’m not sure I’ll stick around for them. That Nolan brother that does “Westworld” is apparently developing this for television, I’ve no idea how that will work but good luck to him!
The last Emperox – John Scalzi
I’ve been a fan of Scalzi ever since “old man’s War” and have read almost all his books, this interdependency series has been one of his strongest and I found it to be a very tight trilogy it is closer to “Game of thrones” in space then “the expanse” series although very much its own thing. It has overtones of “Dune” with its clashing noble families but without the tedious boredom. The sarcastic style and ample swearing really works for it. It is definitely one of those series that I would both love to see on film, yet no they would never get the tone quite right.
Prequels are out in UHD - time to watch again as the resolution goes up each decade.
How does that work? They were shot in high def?!
Anyway. Hi. If you want to register, shoot an email to teague [dot] chrystie [at] gmail, and say "farts."
Surely you mean "Fizzle" !
I would be excited to listen to this. I remember the director's commentary was one of the dullest I've ever heard!
and Tony the "presenter"
aka Baldrick
I dig it.
You probably owe JJ Royalties.
I've just read Gideon The Ninth on Boter's recommendation. I enjoyed it but did feel it went on a bit long. I'm not sure I'll be rushing to read the sequel but I didn't hate. I really enjoyed the snarky narrative style which at times reminded me of Terry Pratchett. I certainly didn't pick it up and say "Oh no, not another space lesbian necromancer novel, I am so tired of these."
Because we already have a chat?
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